Re: [sacm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03.txt

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From: "Haynes Jr., Dan" <dhaynes@mitre.org>
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Thanks for the additional review Adam!  If anyone else has time to review the document and provide feedback, it would be greatly appreciated :)!

Thanks,

Danny

> -----Original Message-----
> From: sacm <sacm-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Adam Montville
> Sent: Monday, September 10, 2018 10:19 PM
> To: Haynes Jr., Dan <dhaynes@mitre.org>
> Cc: <sacm@ietf.org> <sacm@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [sacm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03.txt
> 
> Hi Danny,
> 
> Thanks for posting this draft. I did browse through it today - changes look good.
> Also, I (quickly) reviewed the NETCONF section. I didn't see anything glaring
> there, but I'm definitely not a NETCONF expert.
> 
> Kind regards,
> 
> Adam
> 
> > On Sep 7, 2018, at 4:45 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Security Automation and Continuous
> Monitoring WG of the IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : Endpoint Posture Collection Profile
> >        Authors         : Danny Haynes
> >                          Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay
> >                          Lisa Lorenzin
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03.txt
> > 	Pages           : 40
> > 	Date            : 2018-09-07
> >
> > Abstract:
> >   This document specifies the Endpoint Posture Collection Profile,
> >   which describes the best practices for the application of IETF and
> >   TNC protocols and interfaces to support the on-going collection,
> >   communication, and assessment of endpoint posture, as well as the
> >   controlled exposure of endpoint posture to other tools.  This
> >   document is an extension of the Trusted Computing Group's Endpoint
> >   Compliance Profile Version 1.0 specification [ECP].
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sacm-ecp/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-03
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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