Re: [salud] First draft of changes for "expert review"

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Wed, 21 May 2014 19:23 UTC

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> From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
> 
> > This is a first draft of changes needed to change the control of
> > alert-info URNs from "Standards Action" to "Expert Review".  I think
> > I've found all places in the text that would need to be modified.
> 
> I've looked at 5226, and I think we might want Specification Required 
> rather than Expert Review. Specification Required also calls for expert 
> review, but in addition requires there to be a publicly available 
> specification.

That makes sense to me.

> > A new <alert-identifier> that has more than one <alert-ind-part> is
> > the extension of a parent <alert-identifier>, which is determined by
> 
> Is "extension" the right word here?
> I think perhaps "refinement" or "narrowing".

Yes, I've heard the word "refinement" used to mean "create a smaller
sub-category of an existing category".  E.g., "refine a distinction".

Dale