Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09
Laura Liess <laura.liess.dt@googlemail.com> Thu, 23 January 2014 14:23 UTC
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Subject: Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09
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Hi, Thank you for the comments. Please find inline the changes I intend to do in version -11 based on your comments and the corresponding discussion and also my personal opinion. Please let me know if I mised something or if for some reason you don't agree. > > > > > Q1: > > ----- > > > > Remove the references from the Abstract. > [LL] Done in version-10. > > > Q2: > > ----- > > > > There are a number of editorial inconsistences that needs to be fixed. > > > > E.g. “Alert-Info header field” vs “SIP Alert-Info header field” vs > “Alert-Info” > [LL] OK. Change “SIP Alert-Info header field” and “Alert-Info” to “Alert-Info header field” > > > E.g. “180 (Ringing)” vs “180 Ringing” > [LL] OK. Change “180 Ringing” to “180 (Ringing)” > > > Etc. > > > > > > Q3: > > ----- > > > > As the draft updates RFC 3261, I would like to have a section named > “Update to RFC 3261”. Now there are only a few places in the introduction > talking about the update. > [LL] See the a separate discussion on this issue. > > > > Q4: > > ----- > > > > I am not sure the text in section 1.2 belongs to the Introduction. It is > basically the “Update to RFC 3261” section I mentioned in Q3. > > > [LL] OK. Separate main section. > > > Q5: > > ----- > > > > I am not sure the text in section 1.3 belongs to the Introduction. We > normally have a separate section. > > [LL] OK. Separate main section. > > > > > Q6: > > ----- > > > > Section 1.1 says: > > > > “In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header > field, that specifies the tone.” > > > > Should the text say that the header field includes a REFERENCE to a tone? > Later in the paragraph, you DO talk about the referenced tone. > > > [LL] Would you agree with the text “In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header field, that specifies a Reference to the tone.” ? > > Q7: > > ---- > > > > Section 1.1 says: > > > > “The URI is most commonly the HTTP URL to the audio file.” > > > > s/”the audio file”/”an audio file” > [LL] Agree. > > > > > Q8: > > ----- > > > > Section 1.1. says: > > > > “It is not possible to provide semantic indications or names for rendering > characteristics > > that signals the intent and allows the recipient UA to > decide how to render the received > > information in an appropriate way.” > > > > The sentence is very confusing. Why not simply say something like: > > > > “It is not possible to define semantics associated with a > given tone.” > > [LL] OK. I will replace the text with the text provided by Paul in http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/salud/current/msg00456.html. > > > > Q9: > > ----- > > > > Section 4 defines the ABNF for the URN, but the is no text on how to “map” > it into the Alert-Info header field ABNF: > > > > For example, I assume that the URN is encoded using the opaque-part format > of the absoluteURI, and that the sceme value is “urn”. I think it would be > good to indicate that. > [LL] My understanding is that we don't have consensus that the current text must be changed. I would leave the text as it is. Thank you Laura > > > > > Regards, > > > > Christer > > > > _______________________________________________ > salud mailing list > salud@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/salud > >
- [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-ale… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… DRAGE, Keith (Keith)
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-salu… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-… Christer Holmberg