Re: [salud] Combined draft revision

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 08 July 2014 21:49 UTC

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Dale,

I'm reviewing now.

Will you be coming to Toronto? I assume not. But it is closer, so maybe 
you could wangle it. You could talk to the ADs and ask if they can get 
some things covered for you to make it more feasible. They can almost 
certainly comp the registration fee. And Toronto is drivable.

	Best wishes,
	Paul

On 7/8/14 4:31 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote:
> [as an author]
>
> I've updated the XML2RFC draft that incorporates both the "general
> revisions" (update1) and the changes for "specification required"
> (update3), along with one or two editorial changes.
>
> The XML and text versions can still be obtained from
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.xml
>
> The change is that in the earlier version, some references weren't
> expressed with <xref target="..."/>.
>
> ***
>
> More importantly, I've made a set of changes to convert <provider>
> values into a first-come-first-served registry.  And, of course, a
> number of minor changes in wording.  These changes are based on the
> "-update1and3" draft described above.  The XML and text versions can
> be obtained from
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.xml
>
> You can see the diffs between the -update1and3 draft and this draft
> with
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> You can see the diffs between revision 12 and this draft with
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-12&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> This draft covers all the changes that we have discussed as being desirable.
>
> ***
>
> Comments?
>
> Dale
>
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