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Re: [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Fri, 24 January 2014 14:43 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09
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Hi Laura,

I am ok with your answers. Go ahead and submit :)

Regards,

Christer

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Laura Liess <laura.liess.dt@googlemail.com> wrote:



Hi Christer,

Could you have a loook at my answers to your comments Q6 to Q9?  If you agree to them, I could publish the version -11 of the draft whch we could send then to the IESG.



Q6:
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Section 1.1 says:

“In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header field, that specifies the tone.”

Should the text say that the header field includes a REFERENCE to a tone? Later in the paragraph, you DO talk about the referenced tone.

[LL] Would you agree with the text   “In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header field, that specifies a Reference to the tone.”  ?


Q7:
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Section 1.1 says:

“The URI is most commonly the HTTP URL to the audio file.”

s/”the audio file”/”an audio file”

[LL] Agree.


Q8:
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Section 1.1. says:

“It is not possible to provide semantic indications or names for rendering characteristics
                that signals the intent and allows the recipient UA to decide how to render the received
information in an appropriate way.”

The sentence is very confusing. Why not simply say something like:

                “It is not possible to define semantics associated with a given tone.”


[LL] OK. I will replace the text with the text provided by Paul in http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/salud/current/msg00456.html.



Q9:
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Section 4 defines the ABNF for the URN, but the is no text on how to “map” it into the Alert-Info header field ABNF:

For example, I assume that the URN is encoded using the opaque-part format of the absoluteURI, and that the sceme value is “urn”. I think it would be good to indicate that.


[LL]  My understanding is that we don't have consensus that  the current text must be changed. I would leave the text as it is.


Thank you
Laura




Regards,

Christer


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