Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 08 January 2014 15:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09
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On 1/8/14 3:46 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi,
>
> The text suggested by Paul looks ok to me.

I'm looking at my own text again, and thinking it needs a little more 
fixing:

> How about:
>
>    "There is no method to signal the semantic intention of the alert
>     and allowing the recipient UA form of alert indication (such as
>     a particular tone, vibration, or visual display) to use to signal
>     the intention.  Similarly, there is no method to signal particular
>     rendering features (such as short duration, delay, or country-
>     specific conventions)."

Another try:

   "There is no method to signal the semantic intention of the alert
    while enabling the recipient UA to choose the specific alert
    indication (such as a particular tone, vibration, or visual display)
    to use to signal the intention.  Similarly, there is no method to
    signal particular rendering features (such as short duration, delay,
    or country-specific conventions)."

	Thanks,
	Paul