[salud] Nit for the -14

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Fri, 10 October 2014 20:54 UTC

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Subject: [salud] Nit for the -14
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I left something unclear in a change to -13:

   9.1.2.  Initial IANA Registration

   This document defines the <alert-category>s 'service', 'source',
   'priority', 'duration', 'delay' and 'locale'.  The entries to be
   added to the registry table for each <alert-category> are given in
   the respective sections below.

Unfortunately, the phrase "the registry table" is not clear in this
context because it refers back to the preceding section, and this has
confused IANA.  I think we should change that phrase to 'the "Alert
URN Identifiers" registry table'.

Dale