[salud] Combined draft revision

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Tue, 08 July 2014 20:31 UTC

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[as an author]

I've updated the XML2RFC draft that incorporates both the "general
revisions" (update1) and the changes for "specification required"
(update3), along with one or two editorial changes.

The XML and text versions can still be obtained from

https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt

https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.xml

The change is that in the earlier version, some references weren't
expressed with <xref target="..."/>.

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More importantly, I've made a set of changes to convert <provider>
values into a first-come-first-served registry.  And, of course, a
number of minor changes in wording.  These changes are based on the
"-update1and3" draft described above.  The XML and text versions can
be obtained from

https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt

https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.xml

You can see the diffs between the -update1and3 draft and this draft
with

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt

You can see the diffs between revision 12 and this draft with

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-12&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt

This draft covers all the changes that we have discussed as being desirable.

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Comments?

Dale