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Re: [salud] WGLC of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Thu, 21 November 2013 19:55 UTC

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> From: Laura Liess <laura.liess.dt@googlemail.com>

> Please let me know what you think about following changes I did for the
> 10-th version:
> - I moved the "Requirements Language"  section to further down. It has the
> number 1.4.
> 
> - I changed the titles according to Dale's comment and capitalized all
> important words. I left words within <...> and  "alert" witout capital
> letter, excepting when they are at the beginning if a title or of a
> sentance.

Those changes work well for me.

Dale

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