[salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-09
Laura Liess <laura.liess.dt@googlemail.com> Fri, 24 January 2014 13:08 UTC
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Hi Christer, Could you have a loook at my answers to your comments Q6 to Q9? If you agree to them, I could publish the version -11 of the draft whch we could send then to the IESG. > > > > > Q6: > > ----- > > > > Section 1.1 says: > > > > “In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header > field, that specifies the tone.” > > > > Should the text say that the header field includes a REFERENCE to a tone? > Later in the paragraph, you DO talk about the referenced tone. > > > [LL] Would you agree with the text “In [RFC3261] this is done by including a URI in the Alert-Info header field, that specifies a Reference to the tone.” ? > > Q7: > > ---- > > > > Section 1.1 says: > > > > “The URI is most commonly the HTTP URL to the audio file.” > > > > s/”the audio file”/”an audio file” > [LL] Agree. > > > > > Q8: > > ----- > > > > Section 1.1. says: > > > > “It is not possible to provide semantic indications or names for rendering > characteristics > > that signals the intent and allows the recipient UA to > decide how to render the received > > information in an appropriate way.” > > > > The sentence is very confusing. Why not simply say something like: > > > > “It is not possible to define semantics associated with a > given tone.” > > [LL] OK. I will replace the text with the text provided by Paul in http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/salud/current/msg00456.html. > > > > Q9: > > ----- > > > > Section 4 defines the ABNF for the URN, but the is no text on how to “map” > it into the Alert-Info header field ABNF: > > > > For example, I assume that the URN is encoded using the opaque-part format > of the absoluteURI, and that the sceme value is “urn”. I think it would be > good to indicate that. > [LL] My understanding is that we don't have consensus that the current text must be changed. I would leave the text as it is. Thank you Laura > > > > > Regards, > > > > Christer > > > > _______________________________________________ > salud mailing list > salud@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/salud > >
- [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud-ale… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… DRAGE, Keith (Keith)
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Dale R. Worley
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Christer's review of draft-ietf-salud… Christer Holmberg
- [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-salu… Laura Liess
- Re: [salud] Fwd: Christer's review of draft-ietf-… Christer Holmberg