Re: [salud] Combined draft revision

Hi Dale,

This is looking good.

A couple of little things:

Section 10.1 says:

    Extensions, either standard or private, MUST conform to the
    following principles:

This is certainly right for standard extensions. The expert reviewer 
enforces this. For private extensions, can we be normative? We want to 
be, but is that imposing constraints on people rather than code?

I noticed a misspelling in here. s/altert/alert/

	Thanks,
	Paul

On 7/8/14 4:31 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote:
> [as an author]
>
> I've updated the XML2RFC draft that incorporates both the "general
> revisions" (update1) and the changes for "specification required"
> (update3), along with one or two editorial changes.
>
> The XML and text versions can still be obtained from
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.xml
>
> The change is that in the earlier version, some references weren't
> expressed with <xref target="..."/>.
>
> ***
>
> More importantly, I've made a set of changes to convert <provider>
> values into a first-come-first-served registry.  And, of course, a
> number of minor changes in wording.  These changes are based on the
> "-update1and3" draft described above.  The XML and text versions can
> be obtained from
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/worley/draft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.xml
>
> You can see the diffs between the -update1and3 draft and this draft
> with
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update1and3.txt&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> You can see the diffs between revision 12 and this draft with
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-12&difftype=--html&submit=Go!&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fsvn.resiprocate.org%2Frep%2Fietf-drafts%2Fworley%2Fdraft-worley-salud-alert-info-urns-12-update4.txt
>
> This draft covers all the changes that we have discussed as being desirable.
>
> ***
>
> Comments?
>
> Dale
>
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