Re: [savi] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)

"Jun Bi" <junbi@tsinghua.edu.cn> Wed, 30 November 2016 07:01 UTC

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From: Jun Bi <junbi@tsinghua.edu.cn>
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Subject: Re: [savi] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Alissa,

Many thanks for your editorial comments !




Best Regards,

Jun Bi
 
From: Alissa Cooper
Date: 2016-11-30 03:57
To: The IESG
CC: draft-ietf-savi-mix; savi-chairs; jeanmichel.combes; savi
Subject: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
 
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= Abstract =
 
The phrase "must be used" sounds too prescriptive. I think something
along the following lines would be more accurate:
 
In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, the
spoofing of addresses assigned by each technique can be prevented using
the appropriate Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) methods.