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Re: [scim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with COMMENT)

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [scim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars!

> -----Original Message-----
> From: scim <scim-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Lars Eggert via Datatracker
> Sent: Monday, October 18, 2021 7:05 AM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: scim@ietf.org; scim-chairs@ietf.org
> Subject: [scim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
> charter-ietf-scim-01-04: No Objection
> 
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email
> addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory
> paragraph, however.)
> 
> 
> 
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-scim/
> 
> 
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> Minor readability suggestion: don't use semicolons instead of commas:
> 
> "SCIM ", paragraph 2, nit:
> - experience; errata and interoperability feedback; and current security and
> best
> -           ^                                     ^
> + experience, errata and interoperability feedback, and current security and
> best
> +           ^                                     ^

Thanks for this editorial feedback.  I'm not going to merge it.  I believe it is more clear (and grammatically correct) to use a semicolon to separate items in a list in a case where one or more of the items contains a conjunction (i.e., "and").

Roman

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