Re: [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-websocket-08

Iñaki Baz Castillo <ibc@aliax.net> Thu, 11 April 2013 16:18 UTC

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From: Iñaki Baz Castillo <ibc@aliax.net>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2013 18:18:32 +0200
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2013/4/10 Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>:
> Nit/bug: Sec. 5.2.1 ends with a colon in the HTML version *only*, and is
> missing a paragraph.

Hi Yaron, could you please detail again such a nit? I cannot find it,
I see no errors in 5.2.1. Is it an error if 5.2.1 ends with a colon
(before the "transport" BNF)? Same occurs in 5.2.2. And why is 5.2.1
missing a paragraph?

Thanks a lot.

PS: It will take some time to me to reply your entire mail.


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