Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03

Tobias Gondrom <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org> Fri, 14 February 2014 18:28 UTC

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Thank you.
Yes, your reply answers all my questions.
Thanks and all the best, Tobias


On 14/02/14 18:14, Olafur Gudmundsson wrote:
> Thanks Tobias for the review 
>
> On Jan 29, 2014, at 12:29 PM, Tobias Gondrom
> <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org <mailto:tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org>> wrote:
>
>> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>
>>
>> The document is basically just about acronyms to simplify DANE
>> conversations
>> The document appears ready for publication.
>>
>> The security consideration section is sufficient and there are no
>> security issues with this document.
>>
>> There are only two small nits / spelling issues:
>> in section "Abstract":
>> - s/Experience has show that/Experience has shown that
>
> Fixed
>> - speaking of acronyms, the first mention of TLSA should spell it out.
>
> I added: 
> (TLSA is not an acronym but a name )
>
>> Thank you and best regards.
>>
>> Tobias
>
> Hope this addresses your concerns
>
> Olafur
>