[secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-l4s-arch-20

Brian Weis via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 31 August 2022 22:58 UTC

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Reviewer: Brian Weis
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

This is a tardy review, but I would like to acknowledge that I have read it and
I did not see anything troublesome.