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Hi Yaron,

Discussing with the other authors, we propose:

OLD:

    12. Security Considerations

    The same security considerations as for the IPFIX Protocol
    [RFC5101 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5101>] and the IPFIX
    information model [RFC5102 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5102>] apply.


NEW:

    12. Security Considerations

    The addition of complex data types necessarily complicates the
    implementation of the Collector. This could easily result in new
    security vulnerabilities (e.g., buffer overflows); this creates
    additional risk in cases where either DTLS is not used, or if the
    Observation Point and Collector belong to different trust domains.
    Otherwise, the same security considerations as for the IPFIX Protocol
    [RFC5101 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5101>] and the IPFIX
    information model [RFC5102 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5102>] apply.

Regards, Benoit.
> Hi Yaron,
>
> Thanks for your feedback.
> Sure we should add your proposed sentence.
>
> Regards, Benoit.
>> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
>> area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
>> comments just like any other last call comments.
>>
>> IPFIX is a structured information model and protocol for transmitting 
>> information about data flows. This document extends the model with 
>> structured data, basically several types of lists.
>>
>> I have not reviewed the document in full, rather I have looked at the 
>> security aspects only. The Security Considerations refer the reader 
>> to the IPFIX protocol and data model RFCs, and I mostly agree, with 
>> one exception. I suggest to add text similar to the next paragraph:
>>
>> The addition of complex data types necessarily complicates the 
>> implementation of the Collector. This could easily result in new 
>> security vulnerabilities (e.g., buffer overflows); this creates 
>> additional risk in cases where either DTLS is not used, or if the 
>> Observation Point and Collector belong to different trust domains.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>     Yaron


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    Hi Yaron,<br>
    <br>
    Discussing with the other authors, we propose:<br>
    <br>
    OLD:<br>
    <blockquote>12. Security Considerations<br>
      <br>
      The same security considerations as for the IPFIX Protocol<br>
      [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5101"
        title="&quot;Specification of the IP Flow Information Export
        (IPFIX) Protocol for the Exchange of IP Traffic Flow
        Information&quot;">RFC5101</a>] and the IPFIX information model
      [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5102"
        title="&quot;Information Model for IP Flow Information
        Export&quot;">RFC5102</a>] apply.<br>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    NEW:<br>
    <blockquote>12. Security Considerations<br>
      <br>
      The addition of complex data types necessarily complicates the
      implementation of the Collector. This could easily result in new
      security vulnerabilities (e.g., buffer overflows); this creates
      additional risk in cases where either DTLS is not used, or if the
      Observation Point and Collector belong to different trust domains.
      Otherwise, the same security considerations as for the IPFIX
      Protocol<br>
      [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5101"
        title="&quot;Specification of the IP Flow Information Export
        (IPFIX) Protocol for the Exchange of IP Traffic Flow
        Information&quot;">RFC5101</a>] and the IPFIX information model
      [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5102"
        title="&quot;Information Model for IP Flow Information
        Export&quot;">RFC5102</a>] apply.<br>
    </blockquote>
    Regards, Benoit.<br>
    <blockquote cite="mid:4D7F20B2.3070102@cisco.com" type="cite">Hi
      Yaron,
      <br>
      <br>
      Thanks for your feedback.
      <br>
      Sure we should add your proposed sentence.
      <br>
      <br>
      Regards, Benoit.
      <br>
      <blockquote type="cite">I have reviewed this document as part of
        the security directorate's
        <br>
        ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by
        the IESG.
        <br>
        These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
        security
        <br>
        area directors.&nbsp; Document editors and WG chairs should treat
        these
        <br>
        comments just like any other last call comments.
        <br>
        <br>
        IPFIX is a structured information model and protocol for
        transmitting information about data flows. This document extends
        the model with structured data, basically several types of
        lists.
        <br>
        <br>
        I have not reviewed the document in full, rather I have looked
        at the security aspects only. The Security Considerations refer
        the reader to the IPFIX protocol and data model RFCs, and I
        mostly agree, with one exception. I suggest to add text similar
        to the next paragraph:
        <br>
        <br>
        The addition of complex data types necessarily complicates the
        implementation of the Collector. This could easily result in new
        security vulnerabilities (e.g., buffer overflows); this creates
        additional risk in cases where either DTLS is not used, or if
        the Observation Point and Collector belong to different trust
        domains.
        <br>
        <br>
        Thanks,
        <br>
        &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Yaron
        <br>
      </blockquote>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
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