Re: [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 15 April 2016 10:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis
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Hi Samu,

could you please revise the draft accordingly?

Thanks,

Gonzalo

On 10/04/2016 2:54 PM, Sean Turner wrote:
> Thanks for the reminder:
> 
>> On Feb 12, 2016, at 08:47, Samu Varjonen <samu.varjonen@hiit.fi> wrote:
>>> Nits:
>>>
>>> nit 1: I read this a couple of times:
>>>  CERT parameters with the same Cert group number
>>>  in the group field indicate a logical grouping.
>>> Isn’t it that the same group # is in the Cert group field:?
>>>  CERT parameters with the same number
>>>  in the Cert group field indicate a logical grouping.
>>
>> Is this about missing CERT word in the group field? Or did I misunderstand this question?
> 
> Yeah this is completely editorial; I think “Cert” is just in the wrong place.  Might be wrong.
> 
> spt
>