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Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14

Laurent Toutain <laurent.toutain@imt-atlantique.fr> Mon, 01 August 2022 17:24 UTC

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From: Laurent Toutain <laurent.toutain@imt-atlantique.fr>
Date: Mon, 01 Aug 2022 19:22:58 +0200
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14
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Thanks Carl for your review,

the change will be done in -15

Laurent

On Mon, Aug 1, 2022 at 1:16 PM Carl Wallace via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Carl Wallace
> Review result: Ready
>
> This document describes a YANG data model for the SCHC (Static Context
> Header
> Compression) compression and fragmentation rules. The bulk of the document
> is
> the YANG module, which I did not review as I am not a YANG expert. The
> rest of
> the document was fine and mostly consisted of conventions for what appears
> in
> the YANG module. The security considerations seemed sufficient. One minor
> nit,
> in the last sentence of security considerations, the phrase "including
> access
> right and identities" doesn't seem quite right. Maybe "including access
> controls and identities"?
>
>
>

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