[secdir] sec-dir review of draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-06
Derek Atkins <derek@ihtfp.com> Mon, 24 September 2018 21:18 UTC
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From: Derek Atkins <derek@ihtfp.com>
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Subject: [secdir] sec-dir review of draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-06
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Hi,
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving
security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts. Comments
not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the
IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.
Summary:
* Ready to Publish
Details:
* There is an extra (spurious) reference to RFC1912 at the end of
section 1.2, where it says: [RFC1912] This document considers. I
suspect this extra reference should be removed.
-derek
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