Re: [secdir] (Early) Secdir review of draft-ietf-netconf-keystore

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Thu, 13 August 2020 17:32 UTC

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Hi Sandy,

Thank you for your most awesome review!

I’m preparing a response but it’s taking time to get through it all.  Early to mid next week seems about right.

Kent



> On Aug 13, 2020, at 11:04 AM, Sandra Murphy <sandy@tislabs.com> wrote:
> 
> Yep, sorry.  A comment that I felt needed a table of contents, wow.
> 
> In my defense, this was my first view of the draft, not a “why didn’t you mention that earlier” comment.
> 
> This was the result of an initial review before the IETF, a full day of review (my first look at a YANG module) and a full day of transcribing (and resolving) comments.
> 
> —Sandy     
> 
>> On Aug 12, 2020, at 10:35 AM, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote:
>> 
>> PS: Sandy’s response is massive, but it refers to the old Section 4 text so, before digging into it, I want to ensure that you’re happy with the new text.
>