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[secdir] Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-07

Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru> Wed, 02 April 2025 06:31 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru>
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Hi Carl,

thank you for your review.

> Reviewer: Carl Wallace
> Review result: Ready
> 
> The draft is a well-written and is ready as-is.
> 
> Two minor nits. In the intro, change "by means of Post-Quantum Preshared Key"
> to "by means of a Post-Quantum Preshared Key." 

Fixed.

> For table 1, I think it'd be helpful
> to define what '*' means. I see in some referenced drafts this same presentation is
> used with no definition for *, so maybe in this idiom it's fine.

This table is inspired by the table from RFC 8784, where it was used for
the same purpose. We didn't explain what "*" meant there (actually,
it meant "Any value" or "Does not matter"), so I'm not sure this table
should give definition to it. I think that "*" is widely understood as "Any".

Regards,
Valery.

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