Re: [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-20
Randall Gellens <email@example.com> Thu, 05 January 2017 19:12 UTC
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Hi Frank, Thank you for your review. --Randy At 3:36 AM +0000 1/5/17, Xialiang (Frank) wrote: > Hello, > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the > IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the > security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should > treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services > mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed > by vehicles and conveying vehicle, sensor, and location data > related to the crash or incident. Comparing to the ECRIT basic > drafts [draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall] [RFC7852], this extension draft > mostly reuses the same technical aspects of the basic drafts, with > the introduction of some new things: a new set of vehicle (crash) > data -- the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS), new attribute values > to the metadata/control object, a new SIP INFO package of the VEDS > MIME type, etc. > > Since most technical aspects of this draft are unchanged from the > basic drafts, all the security considerations in them apply for > this draft well. The security consideration in [RFC5069] applies > for this draft too. And these basic drafts already have very > comprehensive and detailed considerations about privacy and > security threats. Regarding the new introduced data and action > values, this draft discusses the general security mechanisms to > protect their CIA (e.g., certificate, encryption, ...) too. In > Summary, I have no more security issues. > > Summary: this document appears in reasonably good shape, and is > written well. I think it is ready. > > Thanks! > B.R. > Frank -- Randall Gellens Opinions are personal; facts are suspect; I speak for myself only -------------- Randomly selected tag: --------------- If you would look up bad labor relations in the dictionary, you would have an American Airlines logo beside it. --U.S. District Judge Joe Kendall, issuing a restraining order against an American Airlines APA pilot union sick out, 10 Feb 1999.
- [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-ecrit-car-cr… Xialiang (Frank)
- Re: [secdir] SecDir review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ca… Randall Gellens