[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics-27
Michael Jones via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 09 May 2024 16:44 UTC
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Date: Fri, 10 May 2024 21:59:17 -0000
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Reviewer: Michael Jones Review result: Ready After -27 was posted, which addressed my SecDir review comments, I re-reviewed. The only remaining bug I found is typographical. In 4.2.1, the underscore is missing from access_token in "(and potentially access token)". This is true in both the .txt and .html renderings.
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