Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Fri, 26 July 2019 13:09 UTC

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Date: Fri, 26 Jul 2019 07:08:45 -0600
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To: Vincent Roca <vincent.roca@inria.fr>
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15
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Thanks Vincent, I've fixed the nit in the source controlled editor's xml
version and it'll show up in the next draft revision.

On Thu, Jul 25, 2019 at 3:06 PM Vincent Roca via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Vincent Roca
> Review result: Ready
>
> Hello,
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> The Security considerations and privacy considerations sections both look
> sound
> to me.
>
> Nits:
> * section 7.1: s/to which they where issued/to which they were issued/
>
> Cheers.  Vincent
>
>
>
>

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