Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc6195bis-04

[Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]>]

Hi Stephen,

On Tue, Oct 9, 2012 at 8:53 AM, Stephen Hanna <[e-mail]> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
> just like any other last call comments.
>
> This draft describes the IANA Considerations for parameters related
> to the Domain Name System (DNS). It obsoletes RFC 6195, which
> performed essentially the same job. The document is well written and
> ready with nits (a few typos listed below). The Security Considerations
> section points out that this document relates to IANA Considerations
> and refers the reader to DNSSEC documents for more information on
> security issues related to DNS. This is a reasonable approach.

Thanks.

> The only nit that I saw was that in section 1.2 (Acknowledgement)
> "Alfred Hoenes contributions" should have an apostrophe after the
> name "Alfred Hoenes" since this is a possessive. You're referring
> to Mr. Hoenes' contributions. At least, that's how I interpret it.
> You might also want to change the section title to be plural since
> you include four names in the Acknowledgement section.

OK. I'm fine with those fixes.

Thanks,
Donald
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