Re: [secdir] sec-dir review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Thu, 15 March 2018 02:34 UTC

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Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 22:34:36 -0400
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Subject: Re: [secdir] sec-dir review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07
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Hi Derek,

My apologies for the delay in response.

Thanks for noticing the typo.

Donald
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On Thu, Feb 22, 2018 at 5:00 PM, Derek Atkins <derek@ihtfp.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving
> security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts.  Comments
> not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the
> IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> Summary:
>
> Ready to publish (with minor edits).
>
> Details:
>
> There is a typo in Figure 2 on page 7 where you have two instances of
> "Tenant2 Site 2".  I suspect that RBat2 should be labeled Tenant2 Site
> 1.  The same mistake is in Figure 4 on page 11.
>
> -derek
>
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