[secdir] this doc needs work

Stephen Kent <kent@bbn.com> Thu, 05 July 2012 16:32 UTC

Return-Path: <kent@bbn.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04F0021F87BF for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 5 Jul 2012 09:32:34 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -105.285
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-105.285 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=-1.100, BAYES_40=-0.185, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-4, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id tYZnV2OnS-WP for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 5 Jul 2012 09:32:32 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from smtp.bbn.com (smtp.bbn.com [128.33.0.80]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 21DA621F8722 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 5 Jul 2012 09:32:31 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from dhcp89-089-227.bbn.com ([128.89.89.227]:49163) by smtp.bbn.com with esmtp (Exim 4.77 (FreeBSD)) (envelope-from <kent@bbn.com>) id 1Smoyy-000Hse-Ly for secdir@ietf.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:32:44 -0400
Mime-Version: 1.0
Message-Id: <p06240808cc1b72007771@[128.89.89.227]>
Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2012 12:32:42 -0400
To: secdir@ietf.org
From: Stephen Kent <kent@bbn.com>
Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="============_-870616532==_============"
Subject: [secdir] this doc needs work
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2012 16:32:34 -0000

I was not assigned to review this doc, but after looking at the intro,
I chose to do so anyway.

Steve