Re: [secdir] [i2rs] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Mon, 26 February 2018 06:12 UTC

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Date: Sun, 25 Feb 2018 22:18:14 -0800
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Subject: Re: [secdir] [i2rs] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14
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> On Feb 25, 2018, at 10:59 AM, Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca>; wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Paul Wouters
> Review result: Has Issues
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat  these comments just like any
> other last call comments.
> 
> The summary of the review is Has Issues.
> 
> This Informational draft specifies an information model for routing information
> bases (RIBs) , and hints at how a read/write API would look like. I think the
> document should be improved to clarify this API beyond a simple mention of SSH
> and TLS in its own section, outside of the Security Consideration section. For
> example, if this is TLS, what is used? Something restful? xml? json? What would
> the URI be? And for ssh, what kind of access would be given? How is this
> restricted to the RIB API ?

When I was reviewing the draft, I was wondering if the document needs a Security Considerations section. I would say that the information model should describe the routing information. I do not think it should specify it. It is more the data model (draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model) that defines or specifies the model, and should have security considerations documented.

Suggest /specifies/describes/g

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Mahesh Jethanandani
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