[secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-07
Carl Wallace via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 01 April 2025 16:50 UTC
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Reviewer: Carl Wallace Review result: Ready The draft is a well-written and is ready as-is. Two minor nits. In the intro, change "by means of Post-Quantum Preshared Key" to "by means of a Post-Quantum Preshared Key." For table 1, I think it'd be helpful to define what '*' means. I see in some referenced drafts this same presentation is used with no definition for *, so maybe in this idiom it's fine.
- [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ip… Carl Wallace via Datatracker
- [secdir] Re: Secdir last call review of draft-iet… Valery Smyslov