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From: Olafur Gudmundsson <ogud@ogud.com>
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Date: Fri, 14 Feb 2014 13:14:45 -0500
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To: Tobias Gondrom <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org>
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/GxOvMw0XXzf2n0MhLnpcqf1Seas
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Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03
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Thanks Tobias for the review=20

On Jan 29, 2014, at 12:29 PM, Tobias Gondrom =
<tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
 These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
>=20
> The document is basically just about acronyms to simplify DANE =
conversations=20
> The document appears ready for publication.=20
>=20
> The security consideration section is sufficient and there are no =
security issues with this document.=20
>=20
> There are only two small nits / spelling issues:=20
> in section "Abstract":
> - s/Experience has show that/Experience has shown that

Fixed
> - speaking of acronyms, the first mention of TLSA should spell it out.=20=


I added:=20
(TLSA is not an acronym but a name )

> Thank you and best regards.=20
>=20
> Tobias

Hope this addresses your concerns

	Olafur


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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Thanks Tobias for the review&nbsp;<div><br><div><div><div>On Jan 29, 2014, at 12:29 PM, Tobias Gondrom &lt;<a href="mailto:tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org">tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org</a>&gt; wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite">
  
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  <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
    <font face="Arial">I have reviewed this document as part of the
      security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
      being processed by the IESG.&nbsp; These comments were written
      primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.&nbsp;
      Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
      like any other last call comments.<br>
      <br>
      <br>
      The document is basically just about acronyms to simplify DANE
      conversations <br>
    </font><font face="Arial">Th<font face="Arial"><font face="Arial">e
          document appears ready for publication. <br>
        </font><br>
      </font></font><font face="Arial"><font face="Arial"><font face="Arial"><font face="Arial">The security consideration
            section is sufficient and there are no security issues with
            this document. <br>
          </font></font><br>
        There are only two small nits / spelling issues: <br>
        in section "Abstract":<br>
        - s/Experience has show that/Experience has shown that<br></font></font></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Fixed<br><blockquote type="cite"><div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"><font face="Arial"><font face="Arial">
        - speaking of acronyms, the first mention of TLSA should spell
        it out. <br></font></font></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I added:&nbsp;</div>(TLSA is not an acronym but a name )</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"><font face="Arial"><font face="Arial">
        Thank you and best regards. <br>
        <br>
        Tobias<br>
      </font>
  </font></div>

</blockquote></div><br></div></div><div>Hope this addresses your concerns</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre">	</span>Olafur</div><div><br></div></body></html>
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