Re: [secdir] New boilerplate for reviews

"Moriarty, Kathleen" <kathleen.moriarty@emc.com> Wed, 10 December 2014 02:59 UTC

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From: "Moriarty, Kathleen" <kathleen.moriarty@emc.com>
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> On Dec 9, 2014, at 9:02 PM, "Melinda Shore" <melinda.shore@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> On 12/9/14 9:52 AM, Kathleen Moriarty wrote:
>> Here is a proposal for alternate text, let us know what you think:
> 
> Should we be construing this as a suggestion to minimize
> comments on document issues not related to security?

Good question.  The change suggestion is a result of editor confusion when they receive a SecDir review.  They usually respond to the reviewer (treat it like any other last call comments), but some are not quite sure with the current mention of it being for the ADs.  Reviews are helpful whenever they come in, but if the comments have already been addressed in some way during the IETF last call, it makes it a lot easier in the IESG review.

If a reviewer is familiar with other parts of the work and has helpful comments & suggestions, please make them to help improve the draft.

Stephen suggested some alternate words to "improving the security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts" (intent is to capture that security comments may be anywhere in the draft and not limited to the security considerations).  The text would be: "improving the security and privacy properties of IETF specifications".

Thank you,
Kathleen
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> Melinda
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