[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-11

Yoav Nir via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 01 November 2019 16:25 UTC

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Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Ready

This is the second secdir review of this document. I'm reviewing version -11.
The previous review was of version -08.

All my concerns were addressed, except one:  I still think it's strange that
the Introduction section is an exact repeat of the Abstract.