Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-07

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Thu, 16 November 2017 07:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-07
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Hi Donald,

Draft -08 updates the RFC 5226 reference to RFC 8126.

                                                       Thanks again,
                                                       -- Mike

From: Mike Jones [mailto:Michael.Jones@microsoft.com]
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Subject: RE: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-07

Thanks, Donald.  I’ll do the update to 8126 in the next draft.

                                                                -- Mike

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Subject: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-07

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is draft is ready with one nit.

This draft defines a metadata format that an OAuth 2.0 client can use to obtain the information needed to interact with an OAuth 2.0 authorization server, including its endpoint locations and authorization server capabilities.

While I am not deeply familiar with this area of security technology, the extensive Security Considerations section seems thorough and correct as far as I can see.

Nit: The reference to RFC 5226 should probably be updated to RFC 8126

Thanks,
Donald
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