[secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10

Yoav Nir via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 15 January 2023 21:31 UTC

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Subject: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10

Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Has Nits

I have previously done an early review of version -09 of this draft.

At the time I was impressed by the breadth and depth of the security
considerations but found a few nits.

In version -10, the breadth and depth are still there with that section taking
no fewer than 18 pages in the text version. Unfortunately, the nits are also
still present.

[secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ml… Yoav Nir via Datatracker
Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-iet… Benjamin Beurdouche