Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment
Tobias Gondrom <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org> Sun, 14 October 2012 22:21 UTC
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment
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Hi Yiu, thank you. Best regards, Tobias On 14/10/12 22:27, Lee, Yiu wrote: > Hi Tobias, > > Thanks for reviewing the draft. Comments inline: > > Thanks, > Yiu > > From: Tobias Gondrom <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org > <mailto:tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org>> > Date: Sunday, October 14, 2012 3:47 PM > To: "iesg@ietf.org <mailto:iesg@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org > <mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, "secdir@ietf.org <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>" > <secdir@ietf.org <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, > "draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment.all@tools.ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment.all@tools.ietf.org>." > <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment.all@tools.ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment.all@tools.ietf.org>.> > Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment > Resent-To: <carlw@mcsr-labs.org <mailto:carlw@mcsr-labs.org>>, > <christian.jacquenet@orange.com > <mailto:christian.jacquenet@orange.com>>, <cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn > <mailto:cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn>>, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com > <mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>, > <roberta.maglione@telecomitalia.it > <mailto:roberta.maglione@telecomitalia.it>>, > <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com <mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>>, > "Yiu L. LEE" <yiu_lee@cable.comcast.com > <mailto:yiu_lee@cable.comcast.com>> > > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the > IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the > security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat > these comments just like any other last call comments. > > > I believe this document (draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment) has an > adequate security considerations section and the main security risks > are sufficiently described for an informational "deployment > considerations" RFC. > > COMMENTS: > section 2.6: > "Internet hosts such as servers must no longer rely solely on IP > address to identify an abused user." > Don't you mean here: "... an abusive user." > and again in the next sentence "...to identify an abused user..." > should be "...to identify an abusive user". > > [YL] Fixed. > > Nits: > - section 1: Overview > third sentence: first mention of "softwire" may require a reference > > [YL] Fixed. > > - section 2.5, last paragraph: > s/Depedning on the rate of NAT table changes/Depending on the rate of > NAT table changes > > [YL] Fixed. > > > Best regards, Tobias > >
- [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-idr-as0 Tobias Gondrom
- [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire-dsl… Tobias Gondrom
- Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire… Lee, Yiu
- Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-softwire… Tobias Gondrom