Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 20 March 2019 05:02 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Mar 2019 10:31:25 +0530
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Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
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Hi Donald,

Thanks for your review, updated in the working copy.

Thanks!
Dhruv


On Wed, Mar 20, 2019 at 3:09 AM Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> The summary of the review is Ready.
>
> Although the Security Considerations section is fairly short, it has
> references to a number of relevant earlier RFCs that have quite
> extensive Security Considerations sections. Furthermore PCEP was
> previous extended to cover P2MP Traffic Engineered Label Switched
> Paths and separately extended to be stateful. This draft's addition of
> support for stateful P2MP TE LSPs is not that big of a change in
> Security Considerations from those in the earlier RFCs.
>
> Editorial
>
> Section 3.2, Page 5, "are same as" -> "are the same as"
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
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