Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-eman-framework-16

Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com> Tue, 25 March 2014 12:31 UTC

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Hi

I have now reviewed version -16.  The formatting problems are still present.

I think the security considerations does an OK job of enumerating the risks. It could use some stronger language, but the information is there.

Yoav