[secdir] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-teas-pcecc-use-cases-14

Derrell Piper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 13 May 2024 00:07 UTC

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Reviewer: Derrell Piper
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is READY.

Clarifying edits and grammatical fixes.

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