Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-invariants-11

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 28 October 2020 14:46 UTC

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Hi Yoav,

thank you for the review. I've opened a GitHub issue in case the editors would like to discuss editorial changes at https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4305, please feel free to track the resolution there. There is also a tracking milestone at https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/milestone/5.

Thanks,
Lars

> On 2020-10-25, at 1:00, Yoav Nir via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Yoav Nir
> Review result: Ready
> 
> The contents of the "security and privacy considerations" section seems to be
> advice for middlebox authors. I think that it may have been better to name the
> section something else.  However, there is no information that is missing, so I
> don't really have any recommendations for changing things.
> 
>