Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05
"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com> Wed, 20 January 2016 17:04 UTC
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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Jan 2016 12:03:24 -0500
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Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05
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Hi Carl, thanks for your review. Carl and Spencer, I think the issue is that “PDM” appears in the (ASCII Art) Figure in section 4.1, without explaining what PDM is (that happens in 4.2). The alternative is to expand a bit on PDM in the explanation of the Figure in 4.1. This way we can leave all the methods together following the 4.1 Graphical Representation section (with the ASCII art). 4<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#section-4>. Discussion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#page-8> 4.1<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#section-4.1>. Graphical Representation . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#page-8> 4.2<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#section-4.2>. Discussion of PDM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#page-10> 4.3<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#section-4.3>. Discussion of "Coloring" Method . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#page-11> 4.4<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#section-4.4>. Brief Discussion of OAM Methods . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05#page-11> Ok? Al From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF [mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com] Sent: Wednesday, January 20, 2016 11:44 AM To: Carl Wallace Cc: draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive.all@tools.ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-05 Hi, Carl, On Sun, Jan 17, 2016 at 12:44 PM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com<mailto:carl@redhoundsoftware.com>> wrote: I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This draft aims to provide clear definitions for Active and Passive performance assessment as well as defining Hybrid methods and establishing means of evaluating new methods as they emerge. The document relies heavily on textual references to other specifications, which can at times be a bit tedious for the reader but I have no particular suggestions regarding this point and it's probably fine for a document that is aiming to corral various earlier concepts. The referenced security and privacy considerations were very good (if nearly as long as this spec itself). One minor point, section 4.2 might be better placed before the current section 4.1 to better set-up the ASCII art in section 4.1. Thanks for the review! Could the authors let me know if the 4.1/4.2 section switch should happen? No need to submit a revision about that until after the telechat tomorrow, if the answer is "yes". Spencer
- [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-… Carl Wallace
- Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-act… Spencer Dawkins at IETF
- Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-act… MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)
- Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-ippm-act… Carl Wallace