Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of of draft-ietf-sipcore-proxy-feature
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Mon, 10 September 2012 08:06 UTC
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-sipcore-proxy-feature.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-sipcore-proxy-feature.all@tools.ietf.org>
Date: Mon, 10 Sep 2012 10:06:31 +0200
Thread-Topic: SECDIR review of of draft-ietf-sipcore-proxy-feature
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Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of of draft-ietf-sipcore-proxy-feature
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Hi Radia, >The draft is ready with nits > >A couple of typos: >In section 4.2.1 "Procedures how features" should probably be something like "The procedure by which features" >4.2.2 tense doesn't match "The procedures in the section applies" >should be "apply" I'll fix the text as suggested. Thanks! Regards, Christer
- [secdir] SECDIR review of of draft-ietf-sipcore-p… Radia Perlman
- Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of of draft-ietf-sipco… Christer Holmberg