[secdir] Re: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5321bis-42

[John C Klensin <[e-mail]>]

Donald,

Thanks for the careful reading.  All of these seem appropriate for
action by the RPC (one or two stylistic issues that may require
discussion with them) rather than anything security-specific as
called for in the now-closed recent Last Call.

FWIW and while nits are being picked, like at least one of its
predecessors, this review was posted many hours after the
notification from the datatracker that the Last Call had closed. 

No idea where the first one listed came from, but presumably some
sort of pasting error -- corrections made in the working version of
the RFCXML file.

thanks again,
   john


--On Friday, April 4, 2025 14:15 -0400 Donald Eastlake
<[e-mail]> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
> just like any other last call comments.
> 
> The summary of the review is Ready with nits.
> 
> This is a re-review for version -42. I previously reviewed versions
> -38 and -32 of this draft.
> 
> All good enough except for a few nits.
> 
> Nits:
> 
> When I look at Section 4.1.1.3, I see three unknown character
> glyphs: two right after the end of the 1st sentence in the 2nd
> paragraph and one between "destination" and "mailbox" later in that
> paragraph.
> 
> Section 8.1.1.3, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence, "is required" -> "are
> required"
> 
> Section 8.1.1.3, item (1), "non terminal" -> "nonterminal"
> 
> Section 8.1.1.3, item (2), "a server and client  SMTP" -> "an SMTP
> server and client"
> 
> Suggest deleting both occurrences of "in principle". Either
> something applies or it doesn't. Asserting something qualified by
> "in principle" does not seem useful.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Donald
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