Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13
Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com> Wed, 29 June 2016 03:58 UTC
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13
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On 06/28/16 08:56 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: > Hi Shawan, > > Thanks for our comments. > > On Mon, Jun 27, 2016 at 2:05 AM, Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com> wrote: >> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's >> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. >> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security >> area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these >> comments just like any other last call comments. >> >> This draft specifies layer 3 (inter-subnet) gateway messaging of the >> TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) protocol. >> >> The security considerations section does exist and refers to Intermediate >> System to Intermediate System (IS-IS) authentication (RFC 5310) for securing >> information advertised by Routing Bridges. For generic TRILL security the >> draft refers to RFC 6325. For sensitive data, it prescribes end-to-end >> security, but does not reference or provide details on how this is done in >> a layer 3 deployment. > Would you think it helpful if it gave IPsec and/or TLS as examples of > protocols that might be used for end-to-end security? Yes, whatever is commonly used in TRILL and if there are ones that shouldn't be used then I would suggest writing text describing why not. >> General comments: >> >> None. >> >> Editorial comments: >> >> Does TRILL and FGL need to be expanded in the Abstract and Introduction >> section, respectively? >> I think it would be helpful to describe the "Inner.VLAN" syntax used >> throughout the document. > The payload of a TRILL Data packet looks like an Ethernet frame with a > VLAN tag which is the inner.VLAN. This could be added to the > definitions in Section 2. Thanks for clarifying. > ... >> s/optimal pair-wise forwarding path/optimal pair-wise forwarding paths/ > I don't see that in version -13. The text was part of a new-line. Let's try: s/wise forwarding path/wise forwarding paths/ Shawn. --
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