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From: <kathleen.moriarty@emc.com>
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Date: Mon, 14 Mar 2011 19:29:34 -0400
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Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of
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I reviewed this document (draft-ietf-intarea-server-logging-recommendations=
-03) as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IET=
F documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written prima=
rily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and =
WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comment=
s.

The document looks pretty good from a security standpoint, but I would reco=
mmend adding a few other items to be considered out-of-scope or additional =
security considerations would be necessary.  Since the document already men=
tions that record retention is out-of-scope, I think it would be useful to =
add that server security and transport security is important for the protec=
tion of logs for Internet facing systems.    After stating that it is an im=
portant consideration, then state something to the effect of the service pr=
ovider must consider the risks, including the data and services on the serv=
er to determine the appropriate measures.

The protection of logs is critical in incident investigations.  If logs are=
 tampered with, evidence could be destroyed.

I did see a few grammar nits as well.  The Gen-Art review should cover that=
.  If you want me to take a look at it after these adjustments have been ma=
de, I would be happy to assist.

Best regards,
Kathleen

