Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib-06
"Deepak Kumar (dekumar)" <dekumar@cisco.com> Thu, 13 August 2015 17:52 UTC
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From: "Deepak Kumar (dekumar)" <dekumar@cisco.com>
To: Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com>, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Hi Alia, I will be able to take care of all comments over weekend. Thanks, Deepak From: Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com<mailto:akatlas@gmail.com>> Date: Thursday, August 13, 2015 at 10:44 AM To: "d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>" <d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>> Cc: dekumar <dekumar@cisco.com<mailto:dekumar@cisco.com>>, "draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib.all@tools.ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib.all@tools.ietf.org>>, Tissa Senevirathne <tsenevir@gmail.com<mailto:tsenevir@gmail.com>>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:ynir.ietf@gmail.com>>, secdir <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>> Subject: Re: SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib-06 Hi Deepak, Are you planning on publishing an updated draft today? I'd like to move the draft ahead to IESG Evaluation. Thanks, Alia On Mon, Aug 10, 2015 at 2:19 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>> wrote: HI Deepak, On Sun, Aug 9, 2015 at 10:07 PM, Deepak Kumar (dekumar) <dekumar@cisco.com<mailto:dekumar@cisco.com>> wrote: > Hi Yoav, > > Thanks for review and comments. Please advise if we need to fix the nits > and comments and upload new version as I am not sure about procedure of > fixing comments during last call. > > Tissa has moved out of Cisco and working in another Company, I don¹t have > privy of his new contact so I will contact him to get new contact and > update the document also. I've added Tissa to the cc list above. I believe that for now he wants to be listed with "Consultant" as his affiliation and with email address <tsenevir@gmail.com<mailto:tsenevir@gmail.com>>. The IETF LC ends the 13th, in a few days. I suggest that you update the contact info for Tissa, spell out OAM, and update the MODULE-IDENTITY, since those don't seem like they would be controversial. For any changes to the Security Considerations text, I suggest you post proposed text in this thread before editing it in. Thanks, Donald (Shepherd) ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270<tel:%2B1-508-333-2270> (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com> > Thanks, > Deepak > > On 8/8/15, 2:18 PM, "Yoav Nir" <ynir.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:ynir.ietf@gmail.com>> wrote: > >>Hi. >> >>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's >>ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. >>These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security >>area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these >>comments just like any other last call comments. >> >>TL;DR: The document is ready with nits. >> >>The document contains a MIB for operations, administration, and >>maintenance (OAM) of TRILL. As is common for such documents, 34 of its 45 >>pages is section 7 ("Definition of the TRILL OAM MIB module²). Being an >>expert on neither TRILL nor MIBs I have mostly skipped that section. >> >>Usually with MIB documents, the security considerations for the protocol >>(several TRILL RFCs in this case) are in the protocol documents, while >>the security considerations for SNMP are in the SNMP document (RFC 3410). >>The MIB document only points data that is sensitive (in terms of privacy >>or information leakage), and data which is dangerous in the sense that >>falsified or modified data could lead to damage. >> >>In this document the Security Considerations section does a good job of >>explaining that modified data can lead to changes in routing and >>potentially to denial of service. The second paragraph is a little >>hand-wavy for my taste: >> >> There are number of management objects defined in this MIB module >> with a MAX-ACCESS clause of read-create. Such objects may be >> considered sensitive or vulnerable in some network environments. >> >>What network environment? Why in some but not in others? The third >>paragraph is similar: >> >> Some of the readable objects in this MIB module (objects with a MAC- >> ACCESS other than not-accessible) may be considered sensitive or >> vulnerable in some network environments. >> >>The section concludes with text that looks very familiar from other MIB >>documents, basically saying that you should use SNMPv3 because it has >>protections whereas earlier versions don¹t. It is also important to have >>proper access control rules. One nit is that the section says that the >>cryptographic mechanisms in SNMPv3 provide ³privacy². As of late we tend >>to use that word for the protection of information about humans, not so >>much about link status. >> >>A few general nits: >> - In most documents that I see, the content of sections 1-4 is in a >>single section. >> - OAM is not expanded before first use. >> - The MODULE-IDENTITY has ³TBD² for ORGANIZATION and authors¹ names in >>CONTACT-INFO. looking at a few recent MIB documents, the working group is >>usually given as ORGANIZATION and its mailing list is given as contact >>info. >> >>Yoav >> >
- [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-oam-m… Yoav Nir
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Yoav Nir
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Deepak Kumar (dekumar)
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Alia Atlas
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Deepak Kumar (dekumar)
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Alia Atlas
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Kathleen Moriarty
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Alia Atlas
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Deepak Kumar (dekumar)
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Kathleen Moriarty
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Deepak Kumar (dekumar)
- Re: [secdir] SecDir Review for draft-ietf-trill-o… Yoav Nir