[secdir] Gen-ART / SecDir Review of draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07
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From: "Matt Miller (mamille2)" <mamille2@cisco.com>
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Subject: [secdir] Gen-ART / SecDir Review of draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07
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I am the coincidentally-assigned Gen-ART and SecDir reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. The Security Directorate reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the security area directors. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments that arrived on time. For more information on Gen-Art, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. Document: draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07 Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller Review Date: 2016-06-02 IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-01 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready to be published as a Proposed Standard once the nit is taken care of. I reviewed a previous revision of this document (-04), and all of my concerns from the earlier review are addressed herein. I note this document includes normative references to two Informational documents (RFCs 7201 and 7667). The references are important to properly understand some of the security considerations of this document, but it appears the responsible AD is to add them to the approved downrefs registry. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: * In Section 7 "Security Considerations", "the" is missing between "Since" and "splicer" in the first sentence of the third paragraph. -- - m&m Matt Miller Cisco Systems, Inc.
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