From: Charlie Kaufman <charliek@microsoft.com>
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Thread-Topic: [secdir] secdir review of draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09
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Date: Sat, 25 Jan 2014 01:18:49 +0000
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Subject: [secdir]  secdir review of draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

This document is a mechanism to bring an IANA registry of log event types u=
p to date to correspond with existing practice based on updates to the prot=
ocol defined in RFC3954. There are no security considerations other than va=
gue concerns over what a buggy existing implementations might do if they se=
e new event types that they don't recognize. This should not be controversi=
al.

Formatting nits:

At the bottom of page 2 and the top of page 3, there are question marks tha=
t seem to have a pre-pended space that looks out of place, but it may have =
been required by some formatting requirement around the bracketed reference=
 that precedes it.

The formatter that translated the XML in appendix A into text for the RFC s=
eems to have strange taste in where to place line breaks. For example, in t=
he middle of page 13, there appears:

<reference>
 http://www
 .cisco.com
 /en/US/pro
 ducts/hw/s
 witches/ps
 700/products_configuration_example...

	--Charlie