[secdir] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-masque-ip-proxy-reqs-02

Loganaden Velvindron via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 24 May 2021 14:45 UTC

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Reviewer: Loganaden Velvindron
Review result: Has Nits

I'm reviewing the document as part of the Security Directorate (SECDIR). 

-Wireguard is mentioned in section 2.2 but there is no link to the design of
the wireguard protocol.

-In section 3.9, there are no mention of techniques such as padding to mitigate
the impact of traffic analysis. My understanding is that this is out of scope of the current
Internet Draft.