Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10

joel jaeggli <joelja@gmail.com> Mon, 25 June 2018 14:41 UTC

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To: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>, Shawn Emery <shawn.emery@gmail.com>, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount.all@tools.ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10
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On 6/25/18 7:38 AM, Ladislav Lhotka wrote:
>
>> Editorial comments:
>>
>> OLD:
>>
>> These are the subtrees and data nodes and their sensitivity/vulnerability:
>>
>> NEW:
>>
>> The following should be considered for subtrees/data nodes and their
>> corresponding
>>
>> sensitivity/vulnerability:
>>
> The OLD formulation actually comes from RFC 6087, section 6.1 (Security
> Considerations Section Template). Your NEW formulation indeed looks
> better, so we will use it in the present draft, and I will also send it
> to the netmod mailing list in order to apply this change in
> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis.
>
> Thanks, Lada
thank you
>
>> Shawn.
>> --